假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)学科&网
注意:

  1. 1. 词数100左右;
  2. 2. 可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。

范文(113词):
Dear Mr. Jenkins,

I hope you’re doing well. I’m planning to apply for a summer part-time job at a foreign trade company and have prepared my application letter and resume. I’m writing to ask if you could kindly review and suggest improvements for both documents, focusing on the language and format.

Your expertise in English would be greatly beneficial in making my application stand out. I’m aiming to present my qualifications effectively to increase my chances of getting the job.

I’ve attached the application letter and resume to this email. Any advice on how to make them more professional and clear would be highly appreciated.

Thank you for your support.

Best,
Li Hua

简单版(106词):
Dear Mr. Jenkins,

I hope you are well. I want to work at a foreign trade company this summer. I wrote an application letter and a resume. Can you please check them? I need help with the words and the way they look.

You know a lot about English, so your advice is very important to me. I want to make sure everything is clear and looks good. Your feedback will really help me improve.

I have attached the letter and resume to this email. If you can, please tell me how to make them better.

Thank you very much for your help.

Best,
Li Hua